Saturday, August 27, 2011

REALIZED. -a short film.

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If you all have read my previous post here,
This is our group's submission for the MY Challenge. 

 It tells the story of a student named Ah Kim & how he changed to a better person. 

So, here it is, It's sort of an amateur film. Hope you enjoy it. (:

So, hows it?  Do leave a comment. :)


Small Kucing said...

It's quite good :)

Alif said...

not bad. hope you win the competitionn.

JΞMS£Ɲ said...

@Small Kucing, Thanks! :)

@Alif, Thanks! :)

baselinep said...

Hello. :) i commented before saying you needed to work on sound and pacing.

May i introduce you to Andrew Kramer's Designer Sound FX? If you're familiar with torrents you could give it a try, cause i see what you're trying to do with Inception's Time.

The cutting for your film can be a lot smoother, try to balance out the sound between clips. Be aware that the Fade transition of the video also 'fades' the audio. Some clips should be longer while some should be shorter too. Try to put yourself in the audience's shoes. :)

MY Challenge is a great platform for you to learn and develop your skills in this imo. I believe you have 2 more years of high school? Do take the chance to improve yourself, film by film. :)

Hope i didn't say too much and you would accept some constructiveness. For the local film industry. :) cheers and good luck.

JΞMS£Ɲ said...

@baselinep, Yeah, its our first try, Thanks for the useful advice. :)

Truly appreciate it. ;D

\o/ Matt \o/ said...

Nice one. =D

JΞMS£Ɲ said...

@\o/Matt\o/, Thanks. :D

JamesKYTan said...

For a group of Form 3 students in their very first venture into film industry it is considered good. Nonetheless, you guys still have a lot to learn and be open-minded for constructive criticisms and comments.
Hope you win the competition. Keep it up.

JΞMS£Ɲ said...

@JamesKYTan, THANKS!! ;D

J-SON said...

It's a good start, let your passion for film drive you further. As you progress and gain access to more film-making resources, you will become better! :)

In my opinion, story is still king. So as long as you've a good story to tell, it will be fine. Everybody has different style and not everybody has access to equipment and software.

Share around with more friends and family!

JΞMS£Ɲ said...

@J-SON, Hey, Thanks for the advice. (: Thanks for watching.

Movie Rating Guide. :)

Lately, I've changed my movie ratings a little. (:

Plot :

is the flow & structural plot of the movie itself.

Storyline :

the overall idea & the concept of the movie.


The character's overall acting & character built-up in the movie. Or for animation, the voices & character built-up too.

Effects* :

The visual effects, 3D effects, movie scores/music, graphics, animation of a movie respective to it's genre.

SO, there it is. Thanks! :)